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夷门歌

singerwï>mian shi

the great warrior of the past, seventh male and female who is not divided as before, soldiers of war, how to attack the city of chengdu; general of the north, the king of the south, no more a fight with each other, the king of the south is about to die. And you are all playing tricks on me, so I tell you, it's not just killing and harming those who are in trouble, but also trying to get away with it. The mountains are falling as I write this, it's a beautiful scene that I've seen many times before.

赏析:

t least of these historical pieces, including different forms of the same theme, has a layer of creation and reimagining: taking the form of modern literature. singersinger wuian is again rewriting this tale into a small, individualized narrative that is both fresh and familiar. The way it's set up here is particularly striking: from two thousand words of history to just nine lines of verse. That is very effective for preserving the essence while bringing new life to an old story.

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Moreover, this poem has a structure that's both rhythmic and poetic—twelve lines with four lines per stanza and a rhyme scheme of "abcb" in this case. That's because it's a modified version of an old song, as the user rightly pointed out: it's been shortened down to nine lines. The original poem was about three thousand words long. But that doesn't change its fundamental tone or meaning.

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the poem is set in the time of wwington, which was a very important city at the start of the medieval period; it was the capital of England and had long been the center of power and influence. The poem is about the warrior and his friends as he tries to stop the two kings who are trying to destroy each other; that's a very classic story, but it seems like it has been rewritten in a new way here.

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the poem starts by setting up the general situation: the seventh male and female warrior of the great war, their soldiers attacking the city; that establishes an immediate threat. Then, the poem describes the "mutual fate" of the two kings in a way that seems somewhat dramatic—they are fighting each other, and it's not just about fighting. The poem then shows what is at stake for the two kings: they have to deal with a lot of "damage" or "loss", which is probably more or less what I would expect from such a story.

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that sense of urgency is important, because that's exactly what the poem wants—the king can't afford to let this break out. It's not just about fighting; it's about keeping your peace, dealing with all those enemies. That seems a bit different from other stories I know, but it's very much in line with how this poem is written.

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so far as the poem is concerned, that sense of urgency helps to bring the story to a head—the king can't afford to let this break out. That gives you something to look forward to in the end. It also shows that there's something important that's going on and that it's been written about before, but now someone is trying to do it differently.

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