- 按照以下结构完成改写：
《沈阳故宫现代文阅读答案》
大家 familiar with the vast scale of the Great Wall, I will first introduce沈阳故宫 as one of its grand wonders. The city is a place that combines imperial history and modernity, built by the old King努尔哈赤 in pre-imperial China and the new king 小儿 after the civil war. This is an ancient palace, not to be shaken by history's events.
I will explain the architecture of沈阳故宫, such as the traditional wooden vaults, yellow-tiled roofs, gold-chestironed pillars, and intricate tiling patterns that reflect its grandeur. The treasures displayed here are precious items like gold coins, jewels, and器物，which showcase the craftsmanship and cultural heritage of the Chinese people.
I will also describe the process of constructing沈阳故宫，such as the foundation by努尔哈赤 in 1616 for the Great Wall, the construction of the imperial Palace through 小儿 during his rule, and the establishment of a "large city" with its administration. These events illustrate the historical journey of history itself.
I will comment on the history of沈阳故宫，including 小儿's political career, military service, and relationships with important figures like 皇帝 and 小儿's son. This reflects the resilience and beauty of China's history.
- 在改写过程中需要注意以下几点：
- 确保内容结构完整，逻辑清晰，语言流畅
- 使用简洁明了的表达方式，避免过于复杂的词汇和句式
- 保持原文的核心主题和情感基调
- 合理安排段落顺序，使文章层次分明
- 对大政殿和崇政殿在改写时的差异性处理如下：
大政殿（大殿）主要描述努尔哈赤作为皇帝的历史形象，强调其在后金时期对中华文明的影响。
崇政殿则以皇太极及其后代为焦点，讲述其在清朝统治期间的历史事件和权力斗争，体现“后金→大清”的历史变迁。
- 发挥联想和想像是文章写作特色之一：
在分析沈阳故宫建筑时，我联想到 historical figures, such as the kings of China and the great leaders of history themselves, who have shaped the city's history. This connection allows me to explore the relationship between the city and its past, which is both fascinating and deeply meaningful.
- 文章结尾的特色体现在议论和抒情方面：
在改写后，文章以冷静、理性的方式结束了，通过对沈阳故宫建筑的描述，表达了对历史的感慨与自豪。这种表达方式既展现了个人的情感，也体现了对历史的敬畏。
